As the peer evaluation, I have chosen Nermin's blog. She has written a reflection on cats. I like cats, too. Therefore, I decided to give reflection to her. In her paragraph about cats, the content is totally related to the main theme with the examples and she has a coherent structure in her paragraph with the explicit explanations. For example, I liked the Youtube analysis about cat videos. Throughout the paragraph, she has a positive voice to the reader. The paragraph was not boring; on the contrary, it keep me reading enthusiastically. The reason why I keep reading is she used appropriate conjunctions and enough length sentences, which make the paragraph well-organized, in my opinion. The paragraph was easy to understand. She considered grammer thoroughout the text, but there were some grammatical mistakes about the usage of plural verbs (is-are) and proper verb use (become-make). However, she wrote well in general sense. She prepared well for the paragraph. I can easily understand it because the text could be read fluently with the proper evidences on cats. Also, one important point is that she used variety of vocabulary. There was hardly a word repetition. In conclusion, she has a good writing on cats. The paragraph was a nice reflecion in general sense.
to Nermin Boğaz ( http://norman439.blogspot.com.tr/ )
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